Some of these images would be better cropped...like you said the tank is an akward image because of it being cut off at the edge. The pink tree image would be strengthened by cropping out everything but just the trees...unless there is a clear reason to include the white building...it just seems distracting right now. One of the images of your Alpaca's the main alpaca in the image is looking off to the left (and he is placed to the left of your image) making a distraction as he's looking off the page and the viewer 's eye just falls off the page instead of circling the page. Typically, if the subject is looking off the image, you want to leave the majority of space in the direction they are looking.
i love the fourth picture down (even though i think anita says your eyes just fall off the page. they do a little, but i'm not sure how to remedy that). the angle on the alpaca is interesting. and the alpaca behind that one looks absolutely hilarious.
I love the rain on the roof... very beautiful! The color stands out and really catches the eye. Nice! And your perspective with the cherry blossoms is really interesting. I love them because it's a different approach than what I've seen before.
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I like a good rain every now and then.
Some of these images would be better cropped...like you said the tank is an akward image because of it being cut off at the edge. The pink tree image would be strengthened by cropping out everything but just the trees...unless there is a clear reason to include the white building...it just seems distracting right now.
One of the images of your Alpaca's the main alpaca in the image is looking off to the left (and he is placed to the left of your image) making a distraction as he's looking off the page and the viewer 's eye just falls off the page instead of circling the page. Typically, if the subject is looking off the image, you want to leave the majority of space in the direction they are looking.
i love the fourth picture down (even though i think anita says your eyes just fall off the page. they do a little, but i'm not sure how to remedy that). the angle on the alpaca is interesting. and the alpaca behind that one looks absolutely hilarious.
I love the rain on the roof... very beautiful! The color stands out and really catches the eye. Nice! And your perspective with the cherry blossoms is really interesting. I love them because it's a different approach than what I've seen before.
I love the colors in the second rain photo. They're amazing!!!
I love the first and second picture. It makes it interesting how the water splashed and the color in the second is great
The rain bouncing off the roof is my favorite out of this images.
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